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Additionally, another noticeable factor for the justification of migration to and from the UK was formal study, which represented at more than a quarter. However, interestingly, The UK witnessed the percentage of people left UK for this justification merely shared a minuscule portion.

Additionally, another noticeable factor for the justification of migration to and from the UK was formal study, which represented at more than a quarter. However, interestingly, The UK witnessed the percentage of people left UK for this justification merely shared a minuscule portion. J06YB
Overall, it can be obviously seen that the rooted reason for migration to and from the UK mainly related to job problems. In other word, define job accounted for more than a fifth in both of two charts while the percentage of people who emigrate for formal study held a minuscular share. As can be seen from the pie chart given, the percentage of people who moved to the UK in 2017 mainly owing to the purpose of having a define job, and this figure was similar for emigration, accounted at 29%. In addition, a significant of individuals chose the UK for their emigration reach due to the reason of looking for work made up at 22%, despite the fact that the proportion of people entering the UK for this purpose was noticeably lower at less than a fifth. Additionally, another noticeable factor for the justification of migration to and from the UK was formal study, which represented at more than a quarter. However, interestingly, The UK witnessed the percentage of people left UK for this justification merely shared a minuscule portion. By contrast, a plethora of proportions of those moving for accompany and join the society were quite similar for migration and emigration, especially at 15% and 13%. Although a significant number of people (32%) gave ‘other’ reasons or did not give a reason why they emigrated, this accounted for only 17% with regards to immigration.
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for migration to and from the UK
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job, and this figure was similar for emigration, accounted at 29%.
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individuals chose the UK for their emigration reach due to the
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reason
of looking for work made up at 22%, despite the fact that the proportion of
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people
entering the UK for this purpose was
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, another noticeable factor for the justification of migration to and from the UK was formal study, which represented at more than a quarter.
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,
interestingly
, The UK witnessed the percentage of
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left
UK for this justification
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the society were quite similar for migration and emigration,
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(32%) gave ‘other’
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why they emigrated, this accounted for
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only
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with regards to
immigration.

IELTS academic Additionally, another noticeable factor for the justification of migration to and from the UK was formal study, which represented at more than a quarter. However, interestingly, The UK witnessed the percentage of people left UK for this justification merely shared a minuscule portion.

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