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Hongkong’s export values in billions of HK dollars

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The provided table depicts the rise and fall of exports in billions of Hongkong dollars in the period from 1997 to 2010. As an overall trend, It can be apparently seen that the exports of all categories rose dramatically except clothing and manufacturing. Meanwhile, the growth rate of metals went up the most, telecommunity and equipment were the largest net values. In particular, There were 3 classifies which rose namely Metals, Equipment and Tele-community. In the meantime, the revenue gained from exporting metals increased by 122%, from 2. 3 billion to 5. 1 billion between 1997 and 2010. At the same time, Tele-community made up for the biggest net values, but the growth figure for was only rose by 61% surge from 7. 9 billion to 12, 7 billion repectively, while equipment grew marginally by 13% from 10. 3 billion to 11. 6 billion. As can be seen in the table, both clothing and manufacturing decreased slightly, in turn from 6 to 5 and 5. 5 to 4 ( $HK billions ). The total of exports in all categories were reflected in the aggrerate of 20% and an entire figure of 38. 4 $HK billions
The provided table depicts the rise and fall of exports in
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Hongkong
dollars in the period from 1997 to 2010. As an
overall
trend, It can be
apparently
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seen
that the exports of all categories rose
dramatically
except clothing and manufacturing. Meanwhile, the growth rate of metals went up the most,
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telecommunity
and equipment were the largest net values.

In particular
, There were 3 classifies which rose
namely
Metals, Equipment and
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Tele-community
. In the meantime, the revenue gained from exporting metals increased by 122%, from 2. 3
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to 5. 1
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between 1997 and 2010. At the same time,
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Tele-community
made up for the biggest net values,
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the growth figure for was
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rose by 61% surge from 7. 9
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to 12, 7
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repectively
, while equipment grew
marginally
by 13% from 10. 3
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to 11. 6 billion.

As can be
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seen
in the table, both clothing and manufacturing decreased
slightly
, in turn from 6 to 5 and 5. 5 to 4
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$HK
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billions
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. The total of exports in all categories
were reflected
in the
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aggrerate
of 20% and an entire figure of 38.
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