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The provided illustration delineates various stages pertaining to the production of animal dry skin.

The provided illustration delineates various stages pertaining to the production of animal dry skin. l7lyo

The provided illustration delineates various stages pertaining to the production of animal dry skin. In General, it can be observed that the manufacture chain consists of 13 steps starting with drying the hide and end up with the completed products. At the very first stage, the hide is hung in the open air so as to make it dry. Once the process is done, the truck will deliver it to a certain plant and subsequently put in the box contains of soap for washing section. Then, it is taken to another bath filled up lime for soaking and come to the flattening gadget to roll it afterward. Having been flattened, the hide is then soak in a mixture liquid called Tannin which is made from water and vegetable matter. Before being transferred to another factory, the hide is rolled for the polishing purpose. In the last but not least of the entire procedure, it is moved to the last point of the producing chain and then the new leather products come out.

The provided illustration delineates various stages pertaining to the production of animal dry skin.

In General
, it can be observed
 that the manufacture chain consists of 13 steps starting with drying the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplantshieldhole upcamouflagesheltercover
hide
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 up with the completed products.

At the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
first
 stage, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplantshieldhole upcamouflagesheltercover
hide
is hung
 in the open air 'So as to' expresses purpose and is used in formal texts. Consider using "to"to
so as to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it dry. Once the process is done
, the truck will deliver it to a certain plant and subsequently
 put in the box contains of soap for washing section. Then, it is taken
 to another bath filled up lime for soaking and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to the flattening gadget to roll it afterward. Having been flattened
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplantshieldhole upcamouflagesheltercover
hide
 is then soak in a mixture liquid called Tannin which is made
 from water and vegetable matter. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
Before
being transferred
 to another factory, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplantshieldhole upcamouflagesheltercover
hide
is rolled
 for the polishing purpose.

In the last This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not least of the entire procedure, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to the last point of the producing chain and then the new leather products This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 out. 