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The provided illustration depicts various steps involved in the production of transforming bottles into dressing items.

The provided illustration depicts various steps involved in the production of transforming bottles into dressing items. PWjyB

The provided illustration depicts various steps involved in the production of transforming bottles into dressing items. Apps has been shown in the diagrams, the entire procedure consists 13 steps beginning with gathering suitable bottles to factories and finishing with the ending products. The chain of manufacturing starts when on knitted used up bottle of water all collected in one place. Then, those are fill up trucks for transporting to the factories, which is the following stages of the process. Once all the bottles come to the factories they are categorized for easily setting up to the next step. Subsequently, they are moved to the funnel-shaped shredder which Potsdam into pieces for cleaning. Having been cut by the machine those pieces are sanitized carefully by a enormous machine. After that they are sun-dried for enough 10 hours to make sure all of them are completely dry. This step is followed by boiling pieces to have them to alter to the softer substance which can make them be more easily strained in the following stage. When coming to the perfect status, they are then transformed into the yarns with various colors. Those yarns subsequently on the go weaving process by a large machine which finally creates fabrics. At the penultimate stage, those fabrics are reeled in for easily delivery to the clothing factories. In the last but not least for the whole procedure, numbers of clothing items such as T-shirts, shirts skirts, dresses could be produced from those rolls of recycling cloth and sold to the market.

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bottles
 into dressing items.

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steps
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bottles
 to factories and finishing with the ending products.

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starts
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bottle
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bottles
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come
 to the factories they are categorized
 for easily
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step
. Subsequently
, they are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
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cut
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enough
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make
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step
is followed
 by boiling pieces to have them to alter to the softer substance which can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 them be more easily
 strained in the following stage. When coming to the perfect status, they are then transformed into the yarns with various colors. Those yarns subsequently
 on the go weaving process by a large machine which finally
 creates fabrics. At the penultimate stage, those fabrics are reeled
 in for easily
 delivery to the clothing factories.

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but
 not least for the whole procedure, numbers of clothing items such as T-shirts, shirts skirts, dresses could be produced
 from those rolls of recycling cloth and sold to the market. 