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NUMBER OF TOURITS VISITING A CARIBBEAN ISLAND

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The line chart provides information on the trend of guests in a Caribbean Isle from 2010 to 2017, which includes cruise ships and island recreation. Overall, the number of visitors is constantly increasing. Each year, tourist arrival has raised almost 1 million visitors. However, the graph indicates that there was a downward number in the number of guests staying on the island. Relaxing on the peaceful isle has been the most attractive choice during visiting the Caribbean Island. From 2011 to 2013, the number of visitors has double increased. Those who prefer to enjoy the island’s atmosphere were almost twice as much as staying on the cruise ships. Despite the past growth, the interest in the island remained steady during the last four years. On the other hand, the tourist’s enthusiasm to stay on the cruise ships shows a growing trend from 2012 to 2015, though it was not as much as the other. Surprisingly, this direction has been changed for the last two years. People having a good time on the cruise ships are moderately higher than those staying on the island.
The line chart provides information on the trend of guests in a Caribbean Isle from 2010 to 2017, which includes
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cruise
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ships
and
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island
recreation.

Overall
, the
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number
of visitors is
constantly
increasing. Each year, tourist arrival has raised almost 1 million visitors.
However
, the graph indicates that there was a downward
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number
in the
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number
of guests staying on the island.

Relaxing on the peaceful isle has been the most attractive choice during visiting the Caribbean
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Island
. From 2011 to 2013, the
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number
of visitors has double increased. Those who prefer to enjoy the
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island’s
atmosphere were almost twice as much as staying on the
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cruise
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ships
. Despite the past growth, the interest in the
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island
remained steady during the last four years.

On the other hand
, the tourist’s enthusiasm to stay on the
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cruise
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ships
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shows
a growing trend from 2012 to 2015, though it was not as much as the other.
Surprisingly
, this direction has been
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changed
for the last two years.
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People
having a
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good
time on the
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cruise
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ships
are
moderately
higher than those staying on the
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island
.
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