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The provided chart illustrates the stages in the production of bricks used for construction industry.

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The provided chart illustrates the stages in the production of bricks used for construction industry. As is seen in the given diagram, the procedure involves multiple stages from extraction raw material to delivery by trucks. Firstly, the collection of clay from the earth is done by digging machine. Then, clay is separated from metal grids followed by taking on rollers. Mixing with sand and water will be done to output from the early stage. The making of bricks consists of two methods, one by wire cutter, another by injecting into the mould. The wet block of bricks move to drying oven where it gets dried for about one to two days. The following stage contains heating chamber allows bricks to heat from moderate to high temperatures at around 200-980 an 870-1300 respectively. The cooling chamber gives final strength by cooling for three to four days. Finally, the packaging will be done to make it ready for delivery through goods vehicle.
The provided chart illustrates the
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stages
in the production of
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bricks
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used
for construction industry.

As is
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seen
in the
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given
diagram, the procedure involves multiple
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stages
from extraction raw material to delivery by trucks.

Firstly
, the collection of clay from the earth
is done
by digging machine. Then, clay
is separated
from metal grids followed by taking on rollers. Mixing with sand and water will
be done
to output from the early
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stage
. The making of
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bricks
consists of two methods, one by wire cutter, another by injecting into the
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mould
.

The wet block of
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bricks
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move
to drying oven where it
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gets
dried for about one to two days.
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The
following
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stage
contains heating chamber
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allows
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bricks
to heat from moderate to high temperatures at around 200-980 an 870-1300
respectively
.
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The
cooling chamber gives final strength by cooling for three to four days.
Finally
, the packaging will
be done
to
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make
it ready for delivery through
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goods
vehicle.
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IELTS academic The provided chart illustrates the stages in the production of bricks used for construction industry.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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