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American citizens spent on mobile phones, domestic and foreign fixed-line and services every year over a period of 10 years starting from 2001

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The given line graph indicates how much American citizens spent on mobile phones, domestic and foreign fixed-line and services every year over a period of 10 years starting from 2001. The overview is that cellphone services witnessed a upward trend during the given period while the opposite was true for domestic fixed-line and services. Additionally, the spending on international fixed-line services cost the least. In detail, starting at its record high of 700$ a year in 2001, the average expense on national land line services decreased about 100$ before declining sharply to 400$ in the final year. By contrast, the annual expenditure on wireless phone saw a spectacular growth, from 200$, at the lowest point of the chart to its peak of 750$ in 2010, which was also the highest increase between three services. In the same period, there was almost no change in the amount of money that Americans spent on global fixed-line services. Starting at 250$, the number oscillated slightly around 300$ in the first four years before staying unchanged until the end of the period.

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