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The line graph illustrates the proportion of exports in Australia to four different countries between 1990 and 2012.

The line graph illustrates the proportion of exports in Australia to four different countries between 1990 and 2012. gAGl3
The line graph illustrates the proportion of exports in Australia to four different countries between 1990 and 2012. Looking from an overall perspective, the percentage of Australian exports to China and India experienced an upward trend while a reverse pattern can be seen in the figureS for Japan and The US. In 1990, just over 25% of Australian commodities were exported to Japan compared to about 10% for the US. In addition, the export to China and India showed a nearly similar figure, at approximately 3%. From 1990 onwards the percentage of exports to Japan had dropped to nearly 17% in 2012. By contrast, after increasing to nearly 17% 5% in 2000, the figure for China then experiencing a significant rise, surpassing Japan and becoming the leading export market of Australia, with at about 28% in the last year. During the same period, exports to the US fluctuated and then declined to 7% in 2012 while a gradual increase by 3% was seen in the figure for India, with at 5% in the final year.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of
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exports
in Australia to four
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different
countries between 1990 and 2012.

Looking from an
overall
perspective, the percentage of Australian
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exports
to China and India experienced an upward trend while a reverse pattern can be
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seen
in the
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figureS
for
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Japan
and The US.

In 1990,
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just
over 25% of Australian commodities
were exported
to
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Japan
compared to about 10% for the US.
In addition
, the
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export
to China and India
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showed
a
nearly
similar
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figure
, at approximately 3%.

From 1990 onwards the percentage of
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exports
to
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Japan
had dropped to
nearly
17% in 2012. By contrast, after increasing to
nearly
17% 5% in 2000, the
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figure
for China then experiencing a significant rise, surpassing
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Japan
and becoming the leading
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export
market of Australia, with at about 28% in the
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last year
. During the same period,
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exports
to the US fluctuated and then declined to 7% in 2012 while a gradual increase by 3% was
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seen
in the
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figure
for India, with at 5% in the final year.
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrates the proportion of exports in Australia to four different countries between 1990 and 2012.

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