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The line graph compares the average oil price with food price index from 2000 to 2011.

The line graph compares the average oil price with food price index from 2000 to 2011. 6m6b8
The line graph compares the average oil price with food price index from 2000 to 2011. Overall, it is clear that average global prices of both oil and food rose significantly between 2000 and 2011. Moreover, the trend for both commodities were very similar. Especially, a strong correlation (93. 6%) is suggested. In the year 2000, the average price of oil just roughly $25 per barrel, and the food price index stood at just under 90 points. Over the following 4 years both prices remained relatively stable, before increasing gradually between 2004 and 2007. By 2007, the average oil price rose to nearly $60 per barrel, and food prices grew by around 50 points. The both commodity prices experienced a dramatic increase from 2007 to 2008, with the oil price reaching a peak of approximately $130 per barrel. Besides, the food price index rose to nearly 220 points. In contrast, by the beginning of 2009, there were a plummet to just over $40 per barrel in the average oil price. Similarly, the food price index declined enormously, from 220 points to 140 points. Finally, in 2011, the average oil price rose once again, to almost $100 per barrel, while the food price index hit the highest point with nearly 240 points.
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from 2000 to 2011.

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of both
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In the year 2000, the
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of
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roughly $25 per
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, and the
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stood at
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under 90
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. Over the following 4 years both
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remained
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between 2004 and 2007. By 2007, the
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grew by around 50 points.

The both commodity
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experienced a dramatic increase from 2007 to 2008, with the
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reaching a peak of approximately $130 per
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declined
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, from 220
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to 140
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Finally
, in 2011, the
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once again, to almost $100 per
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, while the
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hit the highest
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IELTS academic The line graph compares the average oil price with food price index from 2000 to 2011.

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