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The provided chart compares the average amount of hours was spent every day on doing activities by travelers from four separated nationalities, enjoying the holiday in Greece in 2015

The provided chart compares the average amount of hours was spent every day on doing activities by travelers from four separated nationalities, enjoying the holiday in Greece in 2015 L907V
The provided chart compares the average amount of hours was spent every day on doing activities by travelers from four separated nationalities, enjoying the holiday in Greece in 2015. These activities were spending time at the beach, reading books and visiting areas. Also, four groups of tourist came from China, The US, Brazil and Turkey. It is obvious that visiting places was a less popular choice among three activities while reading book was reached the highest hours were used daily. It was undeniable that reading book was an ideal activity for Chinese tourists who spent exactly eight hours per day and three hours for enjoying the beach, a third as much as visiting attractions. Likewise, Americans used most of their free time to read published documents (five hours), four and three hours for the other two activities mentioned. Moreover, spending time at the beach seem to be one of the preferences of Brazilians and Turkish who expended six and five hours each day respectively. In particular, people of two nationalities experienced an equal time spending on flipping thought the pages (four hours). The figures for sightseeing by two groups of visitors were a range from three and two hours respectively.
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by travelers from four separated nationalities, enjoying the holiday in Greece in 2015.

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were spending
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at the beach, reading books and visiting areas.
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while reading book
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for Chinese tourists who spent exactly eight
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per day and three
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for enjoying the beach, a third as much as visiting attractions.
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to read published documents (five
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, four and three
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for the other two
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at the beach seem to be one of the preferences of Brazilians and Turkish who expended six and five
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each day
respectively
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of two nationalities experienced an equal
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the pages (four
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. The figures for sightseeing by two groups of visitors were a range from three and two
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respectively
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IELTS academic The provided chart compares the average amount of hours was spent every day on doing activities by travelers from four separated nationalities, enjoying the holiday in Greece in 2015

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