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The bar chart give information on different methods of waste disposal in a European country between 2005 and 2008

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The bar chart give information on different methods of waste disposal in a European country between 2005 and 2008 Seeing clear that landfill was highest all of three methods in 2005. Affter that it as same as dumping in sea at the last year of the chart, its mean it was fall over years until 2008 The burning had more 60 at the beginning in 2005. In 2008, it was almost remain steady to compared in 2005 The last is dumping in sea which was smallest with 55 in 2005. This was not outstading method if we look overview To start with landfill we had 70 tonnes then it decreased slightly overs years and the last got 40 in 2008. It is difference 30 from 2005. It almost no had any sign of rasing again Secondly is burning which was not stable in each year. Its decline was mild and not suprising, no hit like a bomb or suddenly fall down, it had a sign with year from 2005 to 2006 Finally, the dumping in sea which smallest but it was like landfill fall slowly about 10 over years from 2006, its remain stable at 50 in the next year. Normally, remain each year is a sign to grow or fall jump so we can guess base on many element we have. In 2008, not unexpected, its fall slight about 10. Compared with 2005, it was drop to 30 tonnes.
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methods of waste disposal in a European country between 2005 and 2008

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that landfill was highest all of three methods in 2005.
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Affter
that it as same as dumping in sea at the last
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of the chart, its mean it was
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fall
over years until 2008

The burning had more 60 at the beginning in 2005. In 2008, it was almost remain steady to compared in 2005

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method if we look
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overview


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with landfill we had 70 tonnes then it decreased
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overs years and the last
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40 in 2008. It is difference 30 from 2005. It almost
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had any
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of
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rasing
again

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is burning which was not stable in each
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. Its decline was mild and not
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, no hit like a bomb or
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down, it had a
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with
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from 2005 to 2006

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, the dumping in sea which smallest
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it was like landfill
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slowly
about 10 over years from 2006, its remain stable at 50 in the
next
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.
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, remain each
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is a
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to grow or
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jump
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we can guess base on
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slight about 10. Compared with 2005, it was
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to 30 tonnes.
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IELTS academic The bar chart give information on different methods of waste disposal in a European country between 2005 and 2008

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