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The provided bar chart depicts the information about the number journal sold in different nations between 2005 to 2015. The data has been calibrated in ratio.

The provided bar chart depicts the information about the number journal sold in different nations between 2005 to 2015. The data has been calibrated in ratio. Q8kr1
At is presented in the chart that, In France magazines sold respectively 40%in 2005 to 2015. However, In 2005 united state magazines sold stood at 32%. Movingfurther, 33% magazines sold in the same nations and year. On the other hand, In future the magazines sold approximately 25 to 35%in 2025. furthermore, In 2005 publication sold ratio was 22% of united kingdom. In the similar state journal percentage stood at 20% in 2015. Since, The Italy magazines sold ratio was 15% in 2005 in the same nation publication sold ratio around 20% in 2015. Meanwhile, just about 5% of spain in 2005 to 2015. Overall, it is clearly seen that the highest magazines sold ratio of france whereas, the least publication sold percentage of spain.
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is presented
in the chart that, In France
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magazines
sold
respectively
40%in 2005 to 2015.
However
, In 2005 united state
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magazines
sold stood at 32%.
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Movingfurther
, 33%
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magazines
sold in the same nations and year.
On the other hand
, In future the
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magazines
sold approximately 25 to 35%in 2025.
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furthermore
, In 2005 publication sold
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ratio
was 22% of
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united kingdom
. In the similar state journal percentage stood at 20% in 2015.
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Since
, The Italy
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magazines
sold
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ratio
was 15% in 2005 in the same nation publication sold
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ratio
around 20% in 2015. Meanwhile,
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just
about 5% of
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spain
in 2005 to 2015.
Overall
, it is
clearly
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seen
that the highest
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magazines
sold
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of
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france
whereas, the least publication sold percentage of
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IELTS academic The provided bar chart depicts the information about the number journal sold in different nations between 2005 to 2015. The data has been calibrated in ratio.

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