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The pie chart and table show the source and the total value of fish imported to the U.S in 1988,1992 and 2000.

The pie chart and table show the source and the total value of fish imported to the U. S in 1988, 1992 and 2000. nV8mo

A provided pie chart and tabular chart illustrates the origin and overall value of fish bring in to the America in between 1998 to 2000. Overall, it is palpable that, the canada was the main source of fish provider in the given live span as compared to china and other countries. Looking at the chart in more detail, it is apparant that in 1998 the amount of fish imported was 6. 57$ which is almost 2$ and 4$ less than the value in 1992 and 2000 respectively. While, the figure of fish buy in 1992 and 2000 was 8. 52$ and 10. 72$ consequently. Moving to the rest of the description in 1998 canada becomes majority of fish supplier. However, it had decreased by 16% and 22% inq the years of 1992 and 2000 orderly. According to the same time perieod, canada had been replaced by other countries as a fundamental origin of fish imported. By the rose of 19% and 16% in 1992 and 2000. Which is 27% in 1988. And only 13% of fish supplier in china by the year 1988. Which was inclined steadily by both the years 1992 and 2000.

A provided pie chart and tabular chart illustrates the origin and overall
 value of fish bring in to the America in Use "between" + "and" not "to."  Try this: "between 1998 and 2000".between 1998 and 2000
between 1998 to 2000
.

Overall
, it is palpable that, the Possible spelling mistake found.CanadaCanad
canada
 was the main source of fish provider in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 span as compared to Capitalize this word if you mean the country, not white porcelain.China
china
 and other countries.

Looking at the chart in more detail, it is Possible spelling mistake found.apparent
apparant
 that in 1998 the amount of fish imported was 6. The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$57".$57
57$
 which is almost The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$2".$2
2$
 and The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$4".$4
4$
 less than the value in 1992 and 2000 respectively
. While, the figure of fish This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 in 1992 and 2000 was 8. The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$52".$52
52$
 and 10. The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$72".$72
72$
consequently
.

Moving to the rest of the description in 1998 Possible spelling mistake found.CanadaCanad
canada
 becomes It seems that an article is missing.the majority of
majority of
 fish supplier. However
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 the years of 1992 and 2000 orderly. According to the same time Possible spelling mistake found.period
perieod
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canada
 had been replaced
 by other countries as a fundamental origin Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphof.of!of?of:of,of;
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This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFish
fish
 imported. By the rose of 19% and 16% in 1992 and 2000. Which is 27% in 1988. And This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterChina
china
 by the year 1988. Which was inclined
steadily
 by both the years 1992 and 2000. 