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the chart and graph below give information about sales and share price for coca cola from1996 to 2001

the chart and graph below give information about sales and share price for coca cola from1996 to 2001 q59pr
the pie chart and line graph give data on sales volume of coca-cola company and also illustrates the share price of this brand from 1996 to 2001. overall, In 2000, Coca-Cola was sold most in America and the share price of coca-cola was highest in 1998 and showed some fluctuation. To start with, pie chart show the largest proportion of coca-cola 30. 4％ was consumed in north America. Following this Latin america was the second largest market with 25. 7% sales. In europe, it had more than 20％ sales volume. In asia it sold 16. 45% and in africa it had 7% sales volume. this indicate that America had the largest market for coca-cola while Africa had lowest. Ontheotherhand, the line graph shows that the sharp price of this brand was $36 in 1996 it rapidly increased in the following years. the price reached the peak in 1998 was 80$ per share. Although, the price gradually declined and with some fluctuation, it reached around $60 in 2000 and nearly touched $55 a share in 2001.
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volume of coca-cola
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share
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of this brand from 1996 to 2001.
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overall
, In 2000, Coca-Cola
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most in America and the
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share
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of coca-cola was highest in 1998 and
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with, pie chart
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the largest proportion of coca-cola 30. 4％
was consumed
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north America
. Following this Latin
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america
was the second largest market with 25. 7%
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. In
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europe
, it had more than 20％
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volume. In
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asia
it sold 16. 45% and in
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africa
it had 7%
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volume.
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that America had the largest market for coca-cola while Africa had lowest.
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, the line graph
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that the sharp
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of this brand was $36 in 1996 it
rapidly
increased in the following years.
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the
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reached the peak in 1998 was
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80$
per
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. Although, the
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gradually
declined and with
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fluctuation, it reached around $60 in 2000 and
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touched $55 a
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in 2001.

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