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the proportion of the population who are 65 years old and over in 3 countries(Canada, Germany, and the UK) from 1988 and projections by 2030.

the proportion of the population who are 65 years old and over in 3 countries(Canada, Germany, and the UK) from 1988 and projections by 2030. w7e7l

The table depicts information regarding the proportion of the population who are 65 years old and over in 3 countries(Canada, Germany, and the UK) from 1988 and projections by 2030. Overall, it is noticeable that the population of elderly people is predicted to rise in all three countries over the period from 1988 through 2030. The highest percentage of older people was Germany which will continue to remain consistently ranked first in 2030, while the opposite can be seen in the UK. In the space of 12 years from 1988, the aging population of Canada and Germany went up by around 5% to 20. 67% and 25. 32% respectively. The UK, on the other hand, showed a negligible change in the proportion of its citizens aged 65-and-over age and maintained at just under 15% over the period given. By 2030, it is expected that the number of elderly Germans will rise to reach about 30%, marking the highest point of the whole table. Meanwhile, this percentage of Canada and UK population are also forecast to undergo the analogous pattern, reaching about 26. 35% and roughly 20% respectively.

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old
 and over in 3 countries(Canada, Germany, and the UK) from 1988 and projections by 2030.

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population
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people
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 was Germany which will Consider using "remain".remain
continue to remain
consistently
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 in 2030, while the opposite can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in the UK.

In the space of 12 years from 1988, the aging You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsocietypopulacepeoplecommunityculturestate
population
 of Canada and Germany went up by around 5% to 20. 67% and 25. 32% respectively
. The UK, on the other hand
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showed
 a negligible This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 in the proportion of its citizens aged 65-and-over age and maintained at This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
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.

By 2030, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 that the number of elderly Germans will rise to reach about 30%, marking the highest point of the whole table. Meanwhile, this percentage of Canada and UK You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsocietypopulacepeoplecommunityculturestate
population
 are also
 forecast to undergo the analogous pattern, reaching about 26. 35% and roughly 20% respectively
. 