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the proportion of the other languages that British Student able to speak than English in 2000 with that of 2010.

the proportion of the other languages that British Student able to speak than English in 2000 with that of 2010. YdloQ
The given pie charts compare the proportion of the other languages that British Student able to speak than English in 2000 with that of 2010. The general overview here is that the Spanish language was spoken the majority by the British Student in both given years. As it can be seen that the highest amount occupied by the Spanish language with 20% in 2000, followed by the British Student that could not speak other language with the figure 20%. Along with the French language, Another language, German language, Two other language make up the figure with 15%, 15%, 10%, 10%, respectively. Moreover, there were a significant movement after a decade (2010). The British Student that could speak the Spanish language slight increase of 5% to 35%, which was the most popular language in the year. Likewise, the Student who able spoke Another language and two other language rose a mere 5% to 20%and 15% consecutively. In contrast, the number of student could not speak other language and spoke French language only decreased steady to 10% in each. while, the German language was spoken by British Student in the same percentage of total spoken in 2000.
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than English in 2000 with that of 2010. The general overview here is that the Spanish
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with 20% in 2000, followed by the British
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with the figure 20%. Along with the French
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up the figure with 15%, 15%, 10%, 10%,
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the Spanish
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rose a mere 5% to 20%and 15%
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in the same percentage of total spoken in 2000.
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