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The proportion of income adults and children spent on 4 items in UK.

The proportion of income adults and children spent on 4 items in UK. 11Ww7

The table illustrates the percentage of income that was spent on food, electronic equipment, music and videos by both adults and children, divided by gender in the UK in 1998. Overall, it is conspicuous from the graph that adults spent much of their income on food and least on the videos while children used their salary on music. In terms of adults expenditure, women and men bought 39% and 14% of their income for food and relatively a very much lower amounts on the others like 1% and 10% for electronic equipment, 0. 5% and 1% on videos, and both the genders spent 5% on music. Moving on to Children, Girls spent 2% higher than boys on music and food to 40% and 11% sequentially while boys invested 1% more than girls on videos which was 18%. However, The biggest item to show a disparity was the electronic equipment where boys spent 18% in contrast girls used only 5%.

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, electronic equipment, music and videos by both adults and children, divided by gender in the UK in 1998.

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used
 their salary on music.

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 much lower amounts on the others like 1% and 10% for electronic equipment, 0. 5% and 1% on videos,

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spent
 5% on music.

Moving on to Children, Girls You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
 2% higher than boys on music and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
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 to 40% and 11% sequentially
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 a disparity was the electronic equipment where boys You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
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only
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