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the proportion of British who consumed daily recommended amount of fruit and vegetables in 3 different years consisting of 2002, 2006 and 2010.

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The bar chart gives information about the proportion of British who consumed daily recommended amount of fruit and vegetables in 3 different years consisting of 2002, 2006 and 2010. Overall, it is clear that the percentages of British women, men and children that consumed daily recommended amount of fruit and vegetables saw a increase over the period. In 2002, the proportion of women in the UK eating daily recommended quantity of fruit and vegetables stood at 25%, followed by men at 22%. Meanwhile, the figure for children was 11%, was 2 times as low as that for men. Four years later, the percentage of British women experienced a remarkable increase to 32%, making it the highest figure in 2006. Such trend was not seen in the figure for men and children in the UK, at 26% and 18% respectively.

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