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The graphs shows adolescents following a vegetarian diet between 1960 and 2020.

The graphs shows adolescents following a vegetarian diet between 1960 and 2020. m96Rn

The line graphs illustrates Great Britain adults keep to a vegetarian diet from 1960 to 2020. Overall, it is evident that from the information supplied that although there was a fluctuation position UK adults keep to a vegetarian diet reach a high point in 1980. To begin, this figures stood at 0 in 1960, then it begun to rise. In 1980 it reached a high point to 15. After that until 1990 it deteriorated sharply to almost 8. In a while it started to increase again to about 9 but after a while there was a slight drop to 5 approximately in 1998. Until 1999 it moved upward to 6. But in 2000 there was a moderate collapse to 5. Then it begun to move up again to approximately 12 till 2010. But between 2010 and 2020 it fluctuated

The line graphs illustrates Great Britain adults This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 to a vegetarian diet from 1960 to 2020. Overall
, it is evident that from the information supplied that although there was a fluctuation position UK adults This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 to a vegetarian diet reach a high point in 1980. To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
, this figures stood at 0 in 1960, then it Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean "began"?began
begun
 to rise. In The comma is probably missing here: "1980, it".1980, it
1980 it
 reached a high point to 15. After that until 1990 it deteriorated sharply
 to almost 8. In a while it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to increase again to about 9 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 after a while there was a slight drop to 5 approximately in 1998. “Until” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Until
 1999 it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 upward to 6. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 in 2000 there was a moderate collapse to 5. Then it Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean "began"?began
begun
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 up again to approximately 12 till 2010. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 between 2010 and 2020 it Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphfluctuated.fluctuated!fluctuated?fluctuated:fluctuated,fluctuated;
fluctuated