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the chart below gives information about changes in population in three different countries between 1950 to 2050

the chart below gives information about changes in population in three different countries between 1950 to 2050 L9oVK
The line chart demonstrate previous and expected population changes in Japan, Nigeria and USA from 1950 to 2050 Overall, according to the chart the population of Nigeria and Usa predicted to went up while population of Japan will remain almost same In 1950 usa had the the highest population of the three countries just under 200m. while nigeria had the least around 50m. Usa have increased consistently to just over 300m, in the next five decades. And expected to keep its pace to reaching 450m. Similarly the population of nigeria began to rise from the very first year. The number of population in nigeria increased slightly to 2000 then its started to rise rapidly and that is projected to reach to 600m In terms of Japan, the initial population were 100m. Japan have climbed until 2000. Then started to went down slowly which was anticipated to remain almost same in 2050 that would be more than 100m. It reached its peak in 2000, in that year Japan population were 150m
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, Nigeria and USA from 1950 to 2050

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Usa
predicted to went up while
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will remain almost same

In 1950
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of the three countries
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200m
.
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nigeria
had the least around
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50m
.
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Usa
have increased
consistently
to
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300m
, in the
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increased
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600m


In terms of
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Japan
, the initial
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were
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100m
.
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have climbed until 2000. Then
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. It reached its peak in 2000, in that year
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150m

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