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the maps below show Pebbleton 20 years ago and today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. where relevant.

the maps below show Pebbleton 20 years ago and today. 8LMEk
The map compare Pebbleton in two decades ago and the present place. Overall, there are more recreational places and more habitants in Pebbleton. 20 years ago Pebbleton does not develop the place a lot. There was a small light house at the north on the coast that attached to the sea. Next to the light house there was a cid fort and some a couple of houses located by the sea. Opposite to light house was film studio, which had a playing field next to it. Across the land, there was a school standing by having a river separated the two sides. In the present, there are some places that are developed in Pebbleton. Cid fort has changed to children playground and film studio is replaced by flat. A tennis court is added in to the city at lighthouse lane and there is footpath around the tennis court that link with footbridge which lead to the school at the other land.
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in two decades ago and the present place.

Overall
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Pebbleton
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20 years ago
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Pebbleton
does not develop the place a lot. There was a
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at the north on the coast that attached to the sea.
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there was a
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located by the sea. Opposite to light
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was film studio, which had a playing field
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to it. Across the land, there was a school standing by having a river separated the two sides.

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in to the city at lighthouse lane and there is footpath around the tennis court that link with footbridge which lead to the school at the other land.
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6.0
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