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The diagram shows two maps of an island that has been rebuilt to facilitate visitors

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The diagram shows two maps of an island that has been rebuilt to facilitate visitors. Overall, the infrastructure of this place is fully changed, over the period; a number of accommodations has been built on the island, as well as a pier around the sea, while eastern part is left without any changes. In the first graph, the island can be seen with no hospitality, although after reconstruction it has been fully transformed; in total, nine single doom for accommodation have been built in the centre and six in the western side of the island for tourists after reconstruction. Furthermore, In the midst of the accommodation area, to make the island more hostile one reception and a tourist restaurant is newly added. On the other hand, at the south coast of the island a pier has now been introduced which leads to yachts at the river. However, eastern part of the island is not reconstructed unlike other parts; moreover, Beach at the west corner is also the area which is relatively left untouched.
The diagram
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shows
two maps of an
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island
that has been rebuilt to facilitate visitors.
Overall
, the infrastructure of this place is
fully
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changed
, over the period; a number of accommodations has
been built
on the
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island
,
as well
as a pier around the sea, while eastern part is
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left
without any
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changes
.

In the
first
graph, the
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island
can be
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seen
with no hospitality, although after reconstruction it has been
fully
transformed; in total, nine single doom for accommodation have
been built
in the
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centre
and six in the western side of the
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island
for tourists after reconstruction.
Furthermore
, In the midst of the accommodation area, to
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make
the
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island
more hostile one reception and a tourist restaurant is
newly
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added
.

On the other hand
, at the south coast of the
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island
a pier has
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now
been introduced
which leads to yachts at the river.
However
, eastern part of the
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island
is not reconstructed unlike other parts;
moreover
, Beach at the west corner is
also
the area which is
relatively
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left
untouched.
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