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Graph about energy consumption

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Given is the line graph providing us with information regarding the United State, usage of energy from 1980 predicted up to 2030. Overall, it is starkly apparent that the consumption of energy showing an upward trend, markedly in petroleum including oil. A closer look, utilizing fossil fuels as petrol witnessed an increasing movement from 35 units in 1980 to estimated more than 45 by the end of 2030. Burning coal to providing energy, whereas the natural gas experienced some fluctuation until 2015 and then reach the plateau on level 25. Renewable energies, meanwhile, progress moderately, and nuclear power is on the top due to the predictions. After that consumption of sun and wind power surge from less than 5 to more than 5 levels. Not only could not the usage of tides as hydropower be improved but also it is predicted neither growth nor a cut by 2030.

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Given
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energy
 from 1980 predicted up to 2030.

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energy
 showing an upward trend, markedly
 in petroleum including oil.

A closer look, utilizing fossil fuels as petrol witnessed an increasing movement from 35 units in 1980 to estimated more than 45 by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of 2030. Burning coal to providing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
, whereas the natural gas experienced This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 fluctuation until 2015 and then reach the plateau on level 25.

Renewable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energies
, meanwhile, progress moderately
, and nuclear power is on the top due to the predictions. After that consumption of sun and wind power surge from less than 5 to more than 5 levels. Not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 could not the usage of tides as hydropower be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
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but
also
 it is predicted
 neither growth nor a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 by 2030. 