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The proportion of Australian secondary school graduates

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The pie chart illustrates the percentages of Australian secondary school graduates who were unemployed, employed or further education in the year 1980, 1990, and 2000 Overall, In the beginning, further education was the largest segment and the unemployed was made the lowest contribution. In 1990 and 2000, employed was the biggest significant part of Australian secondary and same with 1980 the unemployed was the smallest segment. In 1980, the proportion of Australian secondary school graduates who were employed took 40%, then made up to a half in 1990, and at the end of the period, it slightly rose to 55%. On the other hand. Further education in 1980 accounted for a half, and in the next 10 years, it dramatically decrease to 38% and lightly drop to 37%. The percentages of unemployed had some fluctuation, in the beginning, it took 10%, then had minimally increase o 12%, however, it fell to 8% in the end.

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