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The production of coffee beans

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The diagram illustrates the process of producing coffee and packaged for sale in the competitive market. It is noticeable from the diagram that there are eleven main steps in the production of producing coffee At the first stage, people pick the coffee beans which are ripe red or medium ripe. Then, they are dried in the sunshine and roasted. The fourth step is rapidly cooled the beans in the special fridge. After that, the beans is grinded manually and mixed with hot water. In the subsequent stage, the mixture is strained so that the water is distracted before freezing it. Then, once more it is grinded and dried in the vacuum in order to release remaining water. Finally, the coffee beans are packed into jars before delivering to the market.
The diagram illustrates the process of producing coffee and packaged for sale in the competitive market.

It is noticeable from the diagram that there are eleven main steps in the production of producing coffee

At the
first
stage,
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people
pick the coffee
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beans
which are ripe red or medium ripe. Then, they
are dried
in the sunshine and roasted. The fourth step is
rapidly
cooled the
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beans
in the special fridge. After that, the
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beans
is
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grinded
manually
and mixed with hot water.

In the subsequent stage, the mixture
is strained
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so
that the water
is distracted
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before
freezing it. Then, once more it is
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grinded
and dried in the vacuum in order to release remaining water.
Finally
, the coffee
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beans
are packed
into jars
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before
delivering to the market.
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IELTS academic The production of coffee beans

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
130 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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