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The process of tomato ketchup is made

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The diagram shows the 15 steps involved in the process of making tomato ketchup. As can be seen, that it is a lengthy process, which is comprised of tomatoes are picked and then put into the basket and culminating in bottles of tomato ketchup is produced and used with food. At the first stage, ripe tomatoes are picked and put into the basket by the picker. Next, they are taken to a warehouse where they are sorted to remove rotten ones so that tomatoes ketchup can get a high quality as possible. The quality tomatoes are then transported to a factory in which they have removed some unnecessary parts including stalks, seeds and skins. After that, they have been stored in containers and are crushed to become liquid then. To enhance flavour, at this point the crushed tomatoes are mixed with several ingredients such as sugar, vinegar and salt before being boiled. After being left in a pot for 2 hours to get it cool, the mixture, which called ketchup, is poured into bottles. The process continues with putting lids on the bottles and labelling. To make sure the safety of products to be consumed, they are inspected carefully by quality controllers. Following this, the bottles are filled into large cardboard boxes and then delivered to the supermarket ready for sale. Finally, customer can purchase and enjoy tasty tomato ketchup with their food.

The diagram This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 the 15 steps involved in the process of making tomato ketchup.

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seen
, that it is a lengthy process, which Did you mean "comprises" or "consists of" or "is composed of"?comprisesconsists ofis composed of
is comprised of
 tomatoes are picked
 and then put into the basket and culminating in bottles of tomato You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgravyseasoningsaltdressingsaucerelish
ketchup
is produced
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 with food.

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 stage, ripe tomatoes are picked
 and put into the basket by the picker. Next
, they are taken
 to a warehouse where they are sorted
 to remove rotten ones This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "tomatoes'" or "tomato's"?tomatoes'tomato's
tomatoes
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ketchup
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
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some
 unnecessary parts including stalks, seeds and skins. After that, they have been stored
 in containers and are crushed
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flavour
, at this point the crushed tomatoes are mixed
 with several ingredients such as sugar, vinegar and salt This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
being boiled
.

After being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 in a pot for 2 hours to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 it cool, the mixture, which called You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgravyseasoningsaltdressingsaucerelish
ketchup
, is poured
 into bottles.

The process continues with putting lids on the bottles and labelling. To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 sure the safety of products to be consumed
, they are inspected
carefully
 by quality controllers. Following this, the bottles are filled
 into large cardboard boxes and then delivered to the supermarket ready for sale. Finally
, customer can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 and enjoy tasty tomato You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgravyseasoningsaltdressingsaucerelish
ketchup
 with their food. 