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Describe the process of producing cement and concrete

Describe the process of producing cement and concrete XGY7g

The first given chart delineates the process of producing cement. The second one shows how concrete is produced for construction purposes. As can be seen from the first diagram, there are five steps in producing cement, beginning with crushing limestone and clay, ending with bags of finished product. To produce concrete, four materials are mixed. At the first step of producing cement, limestone and clay are crushed by a crusher to create power. Next, power goes through a mixer to the rotating heater. In this step, power is rotated and heated by a heat source applied at one end of the tube. After that, it is poured into a grinder. In the final step, cement is ground and packed in bags and ready to be used. To produce concrete, four ingredients involve. Cement makes up 45% of the total material while the proportions of water, sand and gravel are 10%, 15% and 30%, respectively. All the materials are mixed using a machine called a concrete mixer.

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cement
. The second one This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 how concrete is produced
 for construction purposes.

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seen
 from the first
 diagram, there are five You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
steps
 in producing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
, beginning with crushing limestone and clay, ending with bags of finished product. To produce concrete, four materials are mixed
.

At the first
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step
 of producing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
, limestone and clay are crushed
 by a crusher to create power. Next
, power goes through a mixer to the rotating heater. In this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
, power is rotated
 and heated by a heat source applied at one This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the tube. After that, it is poured
 into a grinder. In the final You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
is ground
 and packed in bags and ready to be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
.

To produce concrete, four ingredients involve. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
Cement
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makes
 up 45% of the total material while the proportions of water, sand and gravel are 10%, 15% and 30%, respectively
. All the materials are mixed
 using a machine called a concrete mixer. 