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The process of producing goods from recycling

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The diagram illustrates that how plastic bottles are recycled. Overall, as it is clear that this process consists of nine steps from gathering these materials in the garbage to producing end products. First, as can be seen from the pictures, the waste materials are disposed of in the garbage. After being collected by the trucks carrying these wastefull materials, they are categorized manually based on the being recyclable in the recycling center. Besides, having been compressed into blocks, these recyclable materials are crushed by a pair of special gears to be washed in a particular tank by water in the next step. Plastic pellets, then, are produced by a machine in which can convert these crushed items to plastic pellets. Subsequntly, they should be exposed to heat, until raw materials are from. Finally, the raw materials are stocked in pallets to be moved to various industries to produce various kinds of products, namely pencils, bottles, sacks, and any sort of material that is biodegradable or recyclable.
The diagram illustrates that how plastic bottles
are recycled
.

Overall
, as it is
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clear
that this process consists of nine steps from gathering these
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materials
in the garbage to producing
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end
products.

First
, as can be
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seen
from the pictures, the waste
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materials
are disposed
of in the garbage. After
being collected
by the trucks carrying these
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wastefull
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materials
, they
are categorized
manually
based on the being recyclable in the recycling center.

Besides
, having
been compressed
into blocks, these recyclable
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materials
are crushed
by a pair of special gears to
be washed
in a particular tank by water in the
next
step. Plastic pellets, then,
are produced
by a machine in which can convert these crushed items to plastic pellets.

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Subsequntly
, they should
be exposed
to heat, until raw
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materials
are from.
Finally
, the raw
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materials
are stocked
in pallets to be
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moved
to various industries to produce various kinds of products,
namely
pencils, bottles, sacks, and any sort of
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material
that is
biodegradable or recyclable.
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IELTS academic The process of producing goods from recycling

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  American English
5 paragraphs
166 words
6.0
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