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The pie charts provide information about the preferences of passengers in the choice between two international airlines.

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The pie charts provide information about the preferences of passengers in the choice between two international airlines. The pie graphs examine the principal causes and reasons for the satisfaction level. Overall, it is observed in the One World Air company that people consider expensive tickets. Another point about the satisfaction rating is about delayed or canceled flights. One relevant contrast with Blue Sky Airways, whose primary rating is the plane is limited space. Firstly, pie charts illustrate that the ticket has more satisfaction than 35%, which is a significant majority compared to the use of lost or delayed luggage,  which is a small percentage of 6% in the same company.  However,  the limited space on the plane is significant, with a 29% satisfaction rating. Secondly, the pie charts of the Blue Sky Airways company show that customer satisfaction is considerably lower on delayed or canceled flights,  representing 36% of the ratings, and on expensive tickets, at 31%.  However,  the limited space on the plane is significant, with a 36% satisfaction rating. While poor customer service represents 3% of the overall satisfaction rating.
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charts provide information about the preferences of passengers in the choice between two international airlines. The
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pie
graphs examine the principal causes and reasons for the
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satisfaction
level.

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in the One World Air
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company
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people
consider expensive tickets. Another point about the
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satisfaction
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rating
is about delayed or canceled flights. One relevant contrast with Blue Sky Airways, whose primary
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rating
is the
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plane
is limited
space.

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,
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charts illustrate that the ticket has more satisfaction than 35%, which is a significant majority compared to the
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use
of lost or delayed luggage,
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which is a
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company
.  
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the limited space on the
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 is significant, with a 29%
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satisfaction
rating.

Secondly
, the
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charts of the Blue Sky Airways
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show
that customer satisfaction is 
considerably
lower on delayed or canceled flights,
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representing 36% of the
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, and on expensive tickets, at 31%.  
However
,
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the limited space on the
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 is significant, with a 36%
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satisfaction
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rating
.
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IELTS academic The pie charts provide information about the preferences of passengers in the choice between two international airlines.

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6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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