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Average temperatures – Paris, Dubai and Melbourne

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This graph compares the average temperatures of three different cities (Paris, Dubai and Melbourne) in a period of two months. Units are measured in Celsius degrees. Overall, it is clear that the heat grew in Paris and in Dubai, while it dropped in Melbourne. Paris is the city that has experienced the highest temperature both at the beginning and at the end of the period. The other two cities had opposite trends, even though they were not as dramatic as in Paris. The lowest or the highest peaks were at the end of July, since the temperature always had a growing or decreasing pattern without fluctuating. Paris is the city that had the most significant rise starting gradually in April and ending more rapidly from May to June. The temperature also went up in Dubai, although there was a minor increase from 10 degrees in April to almost 16 in July. On the other hand, there was a slight decline in Melbourne during this period; the temperature, indeed, went down from 15 degrees to 10. The lines show different patterns for each city, however something they have in common is the fact the temperature never remains constant: it always increases or decreases.

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temperatures
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cities
 (Paris, Dubai and Melbourne) in a period of two months.

Units are measured
 in Celsius degrees.

Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the heat grew in Paris and in Dubai, while it dropped in Melbourne.

Paris is the city that has experienced the highest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatcoldclimateconditionwarmth
temperature
 both at the beginning and at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
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 of the period.

The other two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
 had opposite trends, even though
 they were not as dramatic as in Paris.

The lowest or the highest peaks were at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of July, since the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatcoldclimateconditionwarmth
temperature
 always had a growing or decreasing pattern without fluctuating.

Paris is the city that had the most significant rise starting gradually
 in April and ending more rapidly
 from May to June.

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatcoldclimateconditionwarmth
temperature
also
 went up in Dubai, although there was a minor increase from 10 degrees in April to almost 16 in July.

On the other hand
, there was a slight decline in Melbourne during this period; the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatcoldclimateconditionwarmth
temperature
, indeed
, went down from 15 degrees to 10.

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show
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different
 patterns for each city, however
 something they have in common is the fact the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatcoldclimateconditionwarmth
temperature
 never remains constant: it always increases or decreases. 