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The diagramme below shows the stages in the process of canning fruit. Summarise the information by selecting the key features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagramme below shows the stages in the process of canning fruit. DwKok

The given diagram shows the different steps involved in the process of Canning fruit. In general, it involves four steps for getting the end product. First, step A the fruits are harvested and transported to the factory. In the factory all three steps B, C, D take place. After reaching the factory, the grade of the fruit is determined after washing and checking the fruit. The rejected fruits are treated as food for animals on other hand, the selected one will move to other stages of processing. In stage C, the peeling and cutting take place before sealing the cans. In the final stage, the field can be exposed to fire before dispatch for distribution to shops and cafes.

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 involved in the process of Canning You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproductnutcropproducegrainberry
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 product. First
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 B, C, D take place. After reaching the factory, the grade of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproductnutcropproducegrainberry
fruit
is determined
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 sealing the cans. In the final stage, the field can be exposed
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