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The process of producing electricity

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The diagram illustrates the detailed information about the process of producing electricity through the usage of coal. Overall, it is evident that the process goes from multiple stages, it begin with the container of the coal and ends at where the electricity has been produced in the power lines. Initially, in terms of main features the process commence when the coal has been passed into pulveriser, in the second step it enters into the furnace so that it will get heated in order to produce electricity. After this step, there is a main role of turbine and cooler. Turbine passes the current into the generator and in the final step, at this stage of process, current has been produced in the transformer from where the it goes to the power lines. Power lines is the station from where electricity got produced into the area.
The diagram illustrates the detailed information about the
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process
of producing
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electricity
through the usage of coal.

Overall
, it is evident that the
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process
goes from multiple stages, it
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begin
with the container of the coal and ends at where the
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electricity
has
been produced
in the power lines.

Initially
, in terms of main features the
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process
commence when the coal has
been passed
into
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pulveriser
, in the second step it enters into the furnace
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so
that it will
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get
heated in order to produce
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electricity
. After this step, there is a main role of turbine and cooler. Turbine passes the
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current
into the generator and in the final step, at this stage of
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process
,
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current
has
been produced
in the transformer from where
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the it
goes to the power lines. Power lines is the station from where
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electricity
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got
produced into the area.
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IELTS academic The process of producing electricity

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
144 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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