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The bar chart demonstrates information about the average of favorite film genre of among men. In general, it can be seen that action movies are the number-one interesting genre for men, while romantic comedy is the least popular genre over period in question. Looking at the details, Action movies are twice as popular as comedy. The Action movies 40% fun, as opposed to comedy genre which interesting 20 %. Subsequently, the Thrillers are 14 % interesting for men, whereas just 5 % interesting. Science fiction and western genres show the same result, both of which are only 10% interesting for men.
The bar chart demonstrates information about the average of favorite film
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