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the process of producing ceramic pots.

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The diagram gives information about the process of producing ceramic pots. Overall, a closer look at the process highlights the fact that there are thirteen main stages in this process, beginning with ingredients taken by a machine and ending with bottles and jars. Looking at the process in more detail, in the first step of the process, the material is excavated by a large machine before being transported to the manufacturing plant. First, it is fed into the machine then it is crushed by the machine. Then it is put into the machine and mixed with water. After that, the mixture is put into the mold and dry within 4 to 6 hours. In the next stage of the process, after drying, the mold is opened and take the pots move out. The assembled clay pots are placed in a kiln oven 1000 degrees celsius. Subsequently, It is soaked in chemicals, so that the ceramic pots have their color before it is put in color firing. Finally, pots are shipped to stores where customers buy and use them.
The diagram gives information about the
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process
of producing ceramic pots.

Overall
, a closer look at the
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process
highlights the fact that there are thirteen main stages in this
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process
, beginning with ingredients taken by a
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machine
and ending with bottles and jars.

Looking at the
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process
in more detail, in the
first
step of the
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process
, the material
is excavated
by a large
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machine
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before
being transported
to the manufacturing plant.
First
, it
is fed
into the
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machine
then it
is crushed
by the
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machine
. Then it
is put
into the
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machine
and mixed with water. After that, the mixture
is put
into the mold and dry within 4 to 6 hours.

In the
next
stage of the
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process
, after drying, the mold
is opened
and take the
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pots
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move
out. The assembled clay
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pots
are placed
in a kiln oven 1000 degrees
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celsius
.
Subsequently
, It
is soaked
in chemicals,
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so
that the ceramic
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pots
have their color
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before
it
is put
in color firing.
Finally
,
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pots
are shipped
to stores where customers
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buy
and
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use
them.
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IELTS academic the process of producing ceramic pots.

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4 paragraphs
178 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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