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the process of producing a lead pencil

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The diagram illustrates the process of producing a lead pencil Generally speaking, lead pencil production involves 9 main steps beginning with growing pine trees and finishing with producing a lead pencil. The process begins when pine trees are cultivated in nurseries before being replanted 4 months after. After 3 years, the plantation is thinned so as to ensure the growth and the quality of wood. Once the trees are 14 years old, they are cut down to make logs to manufacture pencils. After that, those logs are cut into thin slats before being treated. After being dry for 60 days, slat is grooved and stuck to black lead with glue. Following that, an empty slat is placed on the top to form a sandwich before being heated and hard-pressed. In the next step, the slat is cut into pieces to produce individual pencils. The process ends when pencils are painted, sharpened and stamped before being sold at the market.
The diagram illustrates the process of producing a
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lead
pencil

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speaking,
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lead
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pencil
production involves 9 main steps beginning with growing pine trees and finishing with producing a
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lead
pencil.

The process
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begins
when pine trees
are cultivated
in nurseries
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before
being replanted
4 months after. After 3 years, the plantation
is thinned
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so as to
ensure the growth and the quality of wood. Once the trees are 14 years
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old
, they are
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cut
down to
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make
logs to manufacture
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pencils
. After that, those logs are
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cut
into thin
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slats
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before
being treated
. After being dry for 60 days,
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slat
is grooved
and stuck to black
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lead
with glue. Following that, an empty
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slat
is placed
on the top to form a sandwich
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before
being heated
and
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hard
-pressed. In the
next
step, the
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slat
is
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cut
into pieces to produce individual
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pencils
. The process ends when
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pencils
are painted
, sharpened and stamped
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before
being sold
at the market.

IELTS academic the process of producing a lead pencil

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
159 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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