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The process of making leather goods

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The diagram illustrate how the process of creating leather goods. It is pretty evident that the animal skin is remove and after that drying. Next truck curried it and arrived in the factory. Then in factory, washing it with lime and water. Next, the skin is soaking in the solution of lime. Then the skin pressed with high power by flatting machine. Following the period of the process of soaking, the skin which creat after the process of soaking, is polishing by the machine. Then that skin is transporting to other factory by the truck. In that factory, creating the leather goods like bags, shoes, balls etc. There are total eleven stages to creating leather goods. This process start with the remove the animal skin and drying it and at the end with creating the leather goods.
The diagram illustrate how the
process
of
creating
leather
goods
.

It is pretty evident that the animal
skin
is remove and after that drying.
Next
truck curried it and arrived in the
factory
. Then in
factory
, washing it with lime and water.

Next
, the
skin
is soaking in the solution of lime. Then the
skin
pressed with high power by flatting machine. Following the period of the
process
of soaking, the
skin
which
creat
after the
process
of soaking, is polishing by the machine. Then that
skin
is transporting to other
factory
by the truck. In that
factory
,
creating
the
leather
goods
like bags, shoes, balls etc.

There are total eleven stages to
creating
leather
goods
. This
process
start
with the remove the animal
skin
and drying it and at the
end
with
creating
the
leather
goods
.
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IELTS academic The process of making leather goods

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
137 words
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