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the process of making ceramic pots

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The diagram represents the process of making ceramic pots in the various 3 main steps, which were collecting a raw material, forming those material into pots, and finished the process by heating and coloring them. To begin with, dig up the raw material and transfer them to the factory after that, bring them into the crusher and crushing them. In the step, mixed the material with water to become clay and then can put into moulds to shape it to pots. Let’s it drying in the pots moulds around 4-6 hours. Form there, there were in place in the oven and heated to 1, 000 degree celsius in the last steps you can coloring them and put them into color firing to set the pigment into place, final the process.
The diagram represents the process of making ceramic
pots
in the various 3 main steps, which were collecting a raw
material
, forming those
material
into
pots
, and finished the process by heating and coloring them.

To
begin
with, dig up the raw
material
and transfer them to the factory after that, bring them into the crusher and crushing them. In the step, mixed the
material
with water to become clay and then can put into
moulds
to shape it to
pots
.
Let’s
it drying
in the
pots
moulds
around 4-6 hours. Form there, there were in place in the oven and heated to 1, 000 degree
celsius
in the last steps you can
coloring
them and put them into color firing to set the pigment into place, final the process.
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