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The process of making a cup of tea

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The flow chart shows the process by which a cup of tea is made. Overall, it is clear that making a cup of tea can be divided into two clear sets of stages: those in the kettle and those in the cup. The process requires relatively little specialized equipment and takes around 10 minutes to complete. The initial stages of making a cup of tea all involve the kettle. In the first stage a kettle is filled with water from a tap. After the kettle has been plugged in, it boils after 5 minutes. The stages that require a cup now begin. While the kettle is boiling, a teabag is placed into a cup. Hot water is then added to the cup. Before removing the teabag, the tea should be left for 5 minutes. Finally, having added either sugar or milk, you can drink the tea.
The flow chart
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shows
the process by which a
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cup
of
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tea
is made
.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that making a
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cup
of
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tea
can
be divided
into two
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clear
sets of
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stages
: those in the
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kettle
and those in the
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cup
. The process requires
relatively
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little
specialized equipment and takes around 10 minutes to complete.

The initial
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stages
of making a
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cup
of
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tea
all involve the
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kettle
. In the
first
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stage
a
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kettle
is filled
with water from a tap. After the
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kettle
has
been plugged
in, it boils after 5 minutes.

The
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stages
that require a
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cup
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now
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begin
. While the
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kettle
is boiling, a teabag
is placed
into a
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cup
. Hot water is then
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added
to the
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cup
.
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Before
removing the teabag, the
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tea
should be
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left
for 5 minutes.
Finally
, having
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added
either sugar or milk, you can drink the
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tea
.
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IELTS academic The process of making a cup of tea

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
146 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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