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Below is a map of the town of Bellingham whose population increased considerably between 1980 and 2019.

Below is a map of the town of Bellingham whose population increased considerably between 1980 and 2019. BL8gp
The focus of provided graph is to illustrate some changes in development of Bellingham town between 1980 and 2019. Overall, it can be seen that there is a substantial increase in the size of the town due to renewing city infrastructure: mainly residential areas and also public service zones, dividing into four decade-years period. In the first part of the whole phase, the city dwellers were only existed in the east-bottom side of the main road where is located in the left-hand of the town. However, as soon as this period was over, second process of growing up the population and it was finished with covering the north-west of the major road and also expending initial residential area (a school had been established in 1993) while the railway line, that connected the eastern and western parts of Bellingham, was constructed in 1990. Although after a couple years of the third stage of the development, only hospital had been built in terms of extending the form of the dwelling-place towards the north, freeway in 2010, which was situated being symmetric to the major road in the left, and a sports stadium in 2012 was free from construction works for usage of population. Moreover, house blocks in both sides of second highway, that serviced for being delivered between almost middle parts of the north and east of the town, were built up by founding by the government during this period.
The focus of provided graph is to illustrate
some
changes
in development of Bellingham
town
between 1980 and 2019.
Overall
, it can be
seen
that there is a substantial increase in the size of the
town
due to renewing city infrastructure:
mainly
residential areas and
also
public service zones, dividing into four decade-years period.

In the
first
part of the whole phase, the city dwellers were
only
existed in the east-bottom side of the main road where
is located
in the
left
-hand of the
town
.
However
, as
soon
as this period was over, second process of growing up the population and it
was finished
with covering the north-west of the major road and
also
expending initial residential area (a school had
been established
in 1993) while the railway line, that connected the eastern and western parts of Bellingham,
was constructed
in 1990.

Although after a
couple
years of the third stage of the development,
only
hospital had
been built
in terms of extending the form of the dwelling-place towards the north, freeway in 2010, which
was situated
being symmetric to the major road in the
left
, and a sports stadium in 2012 was free from construction works for usage of population.
Moreover
,
house
blocks in both sides of second highway, that serviced for
being delivered
between almost middle parts of the north and east of the
town
,
were built
up by founding by the
government
during this period.
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IELTS academic Below is a map of the town of Bellingham whose population increased considerably between 1980 and 2019.

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