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The process illustrate how to recycle waste glass bottles.

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The process illustrate how to recycle waste glass bottles. Overall this has 3 stage in this process. At the first stage, used bottles are collected at the collecting points. Then they are loaded onto trucks for delivery to a glass recycling facility. They are cleaned with high pressure water afterward. Green, brown and clear are delivered to the glass factory. Pieces are heat in special furnace at a moderate Temperature into the liquid or liquid products. This is moulded into the the new bottles which are filled and packed. the process finish with the transportation of the new bottles to supermarkets and shops

The process illustrate how to recycle waste glass bottles.

Overall
 this has 3 stage in this process.

At the first
 stage, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 bottles are collected
 at the collecting points. Then they are loaded
 onto trucks for delivery to a glass recycling facility. They are cleaned
 with high pressure water afterward. Green, brown and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
are delivered
 to the glass factory. Pieces are heat in special furnace at a moderate Temperature into the liquid or liquid products. This is Possible spelling mistake found.moldedmounded
moulded
 into Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only "the" or "the" is left.the
the the
 new bottles which are filled
 and packed. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
 process finish with the transportation of the new bottles to supermarkets and Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphshops.shops!shops?shops:shops,shops;
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IELTS academic The process illustrate how to recycle waste glass bottles.

Academic

American English

3 paragraphs

102 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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