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The process diagram illustrates production of wool for domestic and commercial purposes.

The process diagram illustrates production of wool for domestic and commercial purposes. 3xgdl

The process diagram illustrates production of wool for domestic and commercial purposes. Overall, Jacket or Carpet can be obtained as final product after following various steps from wool which in turn pilled from sheep. First, sheep is sheared to get all wool from body. Then it is cleaned and dried to remove dirty particles and which is ready for spinning process. While this procedure, some wastage is sent for recycling and rest of it will go for string production. After this operation, tied strings are kept in tuft storage. Moreover, threads are rotated, can turned in balls of yarn. Finally, this will be combined and jackets and carpets will be fabricated.

The process diagram illustrates production of wool for domestic and commercial purposes.

Overall
, Jacket or Carpet can be obtained
 as final product after following various steps from wool which in turn pilled from sheep.

First
, sheep is sheared
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 all wool from body. Then it is cleaned
 and dried to remove dirty particles and which is ready for spinning process. While this procedure, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 wastage is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 for recycling and rest of it will go for string production. After this operation, tied strings are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 in tuft storage. Moreover
, threads are rotated
, can turned in balls of yarn. Finally
, this will be combined
 and jackets and carpets will be fabricated
. 

IELTS academic The process diagram illustrates production of wool for domestic and commercial purposes.

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American English

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