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The graphs below show how the amount of money spent on protecting crops and how crops are damaged in three different regions of the world in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparation where relevant.

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The line and bar graphs display the amount of money spent at crop protection and 3 ways in which land is damaged in Australia, Europe and Africa. Overall, Australia experienced the most fire damage and was also the only country to see an increase in spending over time, whereas Europe had the least amount of fire damage and saw a considerable decline in the amount of money spent. As can be seen from the table, Europe spent the most money on crop protection in the months of January to June with around 800 to 600 million dollars. For the months of July to December, Australia was the highest spender, ranging from around 450 to 900 million dollars. Finally, it can be seen that Africa is the continent that spent the least amount of money with only 200 to 400 million dollars. With regard to "types of disasters affecting crops", it is clear that fires caused the most damage in Australia in 2005. On the other hand, Floods had the greatest negative impact in Europe and insects caused a lot of damage to the land in Africa. This is the end of my report.
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on crop protection in the months of January to June with around 800 to 600 million dollars. For the months of July to December, Australia was the highest spender, ranging from around 450 to 900 million dollars.
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IELTS academic The graphs below show how the amount of money spent on protecting crops and how crops are damaged in three different regions of the world in 2005.

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