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The process chart shows the life cycle of flowering plants

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The given flowchart pics the life cycle of flowering plants. Overall, there are several steps involved in this process. If one step is missed the whole procedure will be halted. It can be clearly seen that in the first step, seeds are observed the water. Next, water and warmth are needed for roots to grow for germination. Thereafter, in growth stage, stem grows facing the sunlight. In the next phase, insects transport pollen between plants to pollinate. During fertilization, seed and fruit start to from of plant. In the seed dispersal step, seeds are dispersed away from plants and then again start the process of flowering plants.
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flowchart pics the life cycle of flowering
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plants
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, there are several
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steps
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If
one
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step
is missed
the whole procedure will
be halted
.

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clearly
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seen
that in the
first
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step
,
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seeds
are observed
the water.
Next
, water and warmth
are needed
for roots to grow for germination. Thereafter, in growth stage, stem grows facing the sunlight. In the
next
phase, insects transport pollen between
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plants
to pollinate. During fertilization,
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seed
and fruit
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start
to from of
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plant
. In the
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seed
dispersal
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step
,
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seeds
are dispersed
away from
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plants
and then again
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start
the process of flowering
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plants
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IELTS academic The process chart shows the life cycle of flowering plants

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
107 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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