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The graph illustrates the UK immigration,emigration and net migration from 1999 to 2008

The graph illustrates the UK immigration, emigration and net migration from 1999 to 2008 ABlJX
The graph illustrates the UK immigration, emigration and net migration from 1999 to 2008 Overall, it can be seen that both emigration and immigration rates increased and immigration were higher. Net migration seems remain almost every time, reach a peaked in 2004 and 2007 In 1999 the number of the UK immigration was over 450000 and that number of the UK emigration was under 300000 while the amount of UK net migration was around 160000. From 1999 to 2003, the number of immigration and emigration increased fastly. As opposed to the amount of immigration and emigration, between 1999 and 2003, the number of UK net migration almost remained at the same level. Then the net migration peaked in 2004 at about 240000. Between 1999 and 2004 the number of UK immigration increased around 150000 units while that number of the UK emigration was about 60000. After 2004 the Uk immigration was still increase. As opposed to the number of immigration, the amount of emigration was flunctuated, vary around 350000 to 420000. After 2004, the number of netmigration again reached a peak at 250000 in 2007 then drop to about 160000 at 2008
The graph illustrates the UK
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immigration
, emigration and net
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migration
from 1999 to 2008

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, it can be
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that both emigration and
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immigration
rates increased and
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immigration
were higher. Net
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migration
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seems remain
almost every time, reach a peaked in 2004 and 2007

In 1999 the
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number
of the UK
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immigration
was over 450000 and that
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number
of the UK emigration was under 300000 while the amount of UK net
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migration
was around 160000. From 1999 to 2003, the
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number
of
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immigration
and emigration increased
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fastly
. As opposed to the amount of
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immigration
and emigration, between 1999 and 2003, the
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number
of UK net
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migration
almost remained at the same level. Then the net
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migration
peaked in 2004 at about 240000. Between 1999 and 2004 the
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number
of UK
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immigration
increased around 150000 units while that
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of the UK emigration was about 60000.
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2004 the
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Uk
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was
still
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. As opposed to the
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of
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, the amount of emigration was
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, vary around 350000 to 420000. After 2004, the
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of
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again reached a peak at 250000 in 2007 then drop to about 160000 at 2008
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IELTS academic The graph illustrates the UK immigration, emigration and net migration from 1999 to 2008

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