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The plans show a school library 5 years ago and the same library now.

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The given plans demonstrate some major changes to a school library in the duration of 5 years. Overall, the school mostly renovated its library in terms of facilities while keeping the same size. The most noticeable difference in the library was 4 studying tables in the center of the room, as 2 more were added as well as they were all divided into private sections instead of large whole tables. On either side of the studying tables, there were 2 long bookshelves. However, the one in the bottom of the map was removed to make room for student's laptops desks. In addition, other desks for laptops were added in the place of desks used for conventional computers. Also in the 5 year period, the library office has been converted into a conference room in the bottom right corner of the plan. To the left of the studying area, some renovations could also be observed. In the lower corner, the library now has 2 separated borrowing and returning areas instead of 1 joined desk. Besides, there is now a recording room occupying the space used for a classroom, while the meeting room is still remaining.

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changes
 to a school library in the duration of 5 years. Overall
, the school mostly
 renovated its library in terms of facilities while keeping the same size.

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room
, as 2 more were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
as well
 as they were all divided into private sections instead
 of large whole tables. On either side of the studying tables, there were 2 long bookshelves. However
, the one in the bottom of the map was removed
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make
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room
 for student's laptops You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcounter
desks
. In addition
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desks
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added
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desks
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used
 for conventional computers. Also
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5 year
 period, the library office has been converted
 into a conference You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
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 in the bottom right corner of the plan.

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left
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some
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be observed
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now
 has 2 separated borrowing and returning areas instead
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joined
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desk
. Besides
, there is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 a recording You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
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 for a classroom, while the meeting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
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