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The plans show a school library 5 years ago and the same library now.

The plans show a school library 5 years ago and the same library now. 3y0N

The rendered map chart depicts information regarding changes made in school library To begin with, period of 4 years there was no changes in book shelves in present at the centre of library studying table will changed into private student table at the corner of left hand side library office will be converted into conference room Moving further, desk of computer will bring some changes like desk for student laptop in pervious year there were two book shelves one was at a same place and second one will be changed into desks for student laptop moreover at the right hand side corner of classroom will changed into recording studio and meeting room will be at same place borrowing and restoring desk will be changed into two different rooms Overall, it is lucid that at previous time in current plan there will various changes

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