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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart shows the number of times per week (in 1000s), over five weeks, that three computer packages were downloaded from the internet. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The bar chart shows the number of times per week (in 1000s), over five weeks, that three computer packages were downloaded from the internet. MYq6
The line graph illustrates the number of times fast foods like pizza, fish and chips and hamburgers are eaten in an year from 1975 to 2000 by teenagers in australia. The time interval followed in the graph is 5 years. Overall, it is observed that the highest number of times fish and chips are consumed is in the year 1975(100 times) while that of hamburgers and pizzas is in 2000and 1995 respectively (above 100 and 80 respectively). In contrast, the lowest times fish and chips, hamburgers and pizzas consumed are slightly below 40, approximately 10 and around 5 in the years 2000, 1975 and 1975 respectively. The number of hamburgers are eaten has increased gradually from somewhere around 10 in 1975 to slightly above 100 by the year 2000. While in case of pizza it increased from around 5 to above 80 in the years 19775 and 1995 respectively. Furthermore, the consumption of pizza is consisted till the year 2000. In contrast, the consumption of fish and chips started from 100 in the year 1975 and gradually decreased to above 80 in 1980. However, an increase is observed to a value around 90 in 1985 but it eventually decreased over the years to slightly below 40 in 2000.
The line graph illustrates the number of
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foods like pizza, fish and chips and hamburgers
are eaten
in
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an
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year
from 1975 to 2000 by
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teenagers
in
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australia
. The
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time
interval followed in the graph is 5 years.
Overall
, it
is observed
that the highest number of
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times
fish and chips
are consumed
is in the
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year
1975(100
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times)
while that of hamburgers and pizzas is in 2000and 1995
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respectively
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(above
100 and 80
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respectively)
.
In contrast
, the lowest
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times
fish and chips, hamburgers and pizzas consumed are
slightly
below 40, approximately 10 and
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around
5 in the years 2000, 1975 and 1975
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respectively
. The number of hamburgers
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are
eaten has increased
gradually
from somewhere
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around
10 in 1975 to
slightly
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above
100 by the
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year
2000. While in case of pizza it increased from
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around
5 to
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above
80 in the years 19775 and 1995
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respectively
.
Furthermore
, the consumption of pizza
is consisted
till the
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year
2000.
In contrast
, the consumption of fish and chips
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started
from 100 in the
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year
1975 and
gradually
decreased to
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above
80 in 1980.
However
, an increase
is observed
to a value
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around
90 in 1985
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but
it
eventually
decreased over the years to
slightly
below 40 in 2000.
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IELTS academic The bar chart shows the number of times per week (in 1000s), over five weeks, that three computer packages were downloaded from the internet.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
208 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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