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The plans describe a university athletic field before and after some developments from the present day to 2025.

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The plans describe a university athletic field before and after some developments from the present day to 2025. Overall, the sports courts, except a reception, will undergo several remarkable changes including the relocation, erection, and replacement of various facilities. As can be noticed from the maps, in the northwest of this area, there is a park with many trees which is expected to be demolished and replaced by a basketball court in the future. Directly opposite the park, a parking lot will also be converted into a tennis court which is to be relocated from east to west and doubled in size. In the southeast of the same zone, a fitness center is to be newly constructed, taking up the space in which the tennis court is at the moment, and a changing room which is currently adjacent to the reception will be relocated next to the center and lengthened eastwards. Moreover, an outdoor pool lying to the north of the dressing room will be enclosed with walls, which leads to it being converted into an indoor one. Besides, the reception area and an abutting cafe which are relocated to the east of the pool will remain unchanged during this period.
The plans
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describe
a university athletic field
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before
and after
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some
developments from the present day to 2025.

Overall
, the sports
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courts
, except a reception, will undergo several remarkable
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changes
including the relocation, erection, and replacement of various facilities.

As can
be noticed
from the maps, in the northwest of this area, there is a park with
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many
trees which is
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expected
to
be demolished
and replaced by a basketball
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court
in the future.
Directly
opposite the park, a parking lot will
also
be converted
into a tennis
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court
which is to
be relocated
from east to west and doubled in size.

In the southeast of the same zone, a fitness center is to be
newly
constructed, taking up the space in which the tennis
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
court
is at the moment, and a changing room which is
currently
adjacent to the reception will
be relocated
next
to the center and lengthened eastwards.
Moreover
, an outdoor pool lying to the north of the dressing room will
be enclosed
with walls, which leads to it
being converted
into an indoor one.
Besides
, the reception area and an abutting
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cafe
which
are relocated
to the east of the pool will remain unchanged during this period.
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