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The given pie chart compares 7 different subjects preferred by boys in a school.

The given pie chart compares 7 different subjects preferred by boys in a school. 9rpE7
Overall, physical education was the most popular subject in this school among boys while history was the least preferred subject. With regards to the amount of subject chosen, 30% boys in the school preferred physical education as their favourite subject. Science was the second most preferred subject with 25% students’ preference. Next, technology was not chosen by many male students as mathematic, at 10% and 18% respectively. The 5th most popular subject is English at 8%
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, physical education was the most popular
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in this school among boys while history was the least preferred subject.

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the amount of
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chosen, 30% boys in the school preferred physical education as their
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. Science was the second most preferred
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with 25% students’ preference.
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, technology was not chosen by
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male students as mathematic, at 10% and 18%
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. The 5th most popular
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is English at 8%
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IELTS academic The given pie chart compares 7 different subjects preferred by boys in a school.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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