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The maps depict a number of changes which took place in the seaside report from 1990 to 2005.

The maps depict a number of changes which took place in the seaside report from 1990 to 2005. XENOA
Overall, a closer look at the maps highlights the fact that the seaside report was totally transformed in a number of different ways, such as the appearance of the factory and some houses were built. In the north-west of the resort, some housings was knocked down and replaced by some apartments. There are many houses built between and along the two main roads. In the north-west of the resort, the housings were flattened and transformed into supermarket. Many trees and housings were removed to make room for the hotel. A canal in the center of the resort flows from the north to the sea. In the north-east of the resort, from the east to the west of the resort, the railway station was expanded. In addition, the ferry system has been built up. Some trees also were knocked down to replaced by factory. Finally, the airport has been erected near to the school in the resort's south-east corner.
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, a closer look at the maps highlights the fact that the seaside report was
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transformed in a number of
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ways, such as the appearance of the factory and
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some
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houses
were built
. In the north-west of the
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resort
,
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some
housings
was knocked
down and replaced by
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some
apartments. There are
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many
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houses
built between and along the two main roads. In the north-west of the
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resort
, the housings
were flattened
and transformed into supermarket.
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Many
trees and housings
were removed
to
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make
room for the hotel. A canal in the center of the
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resort
flows from the north to the sea.

In the north-east of the
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resort
, from the east to the west of the
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resort
, the railway station
was expanded
.
In addition
, the ferry system has
been built
up.

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Some
trees
also
were knocked
down to replaced by factory.
Finally
, the airport has
been erected
near to the school in the resort's south-east corner.
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